Could you correct my writing ?
My co-worker(55 old in this April) moved to another company.
He was kind enough to lend me the a water bottle with tea or pocari sweat in summer . This bottle was his.
Not only this , I can't thank him enough for his kindness. He didn't complain of my speed at work ,didn't speak ill of me and others and patiently taught me how to work in our company.Moreover, he gave me 100 yen to buy something to drink in severe(very hot or cold) weather.
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Could you correct my writing ?
My co-worker(55 years old in this April) moved to another company.
He was kind enough to lend me the a water bottle with tea or pocari sweat in summer (I'm not sure about this one- lend means you give it back. Do you mean "gave"?) . This bottle was his.
Not only this , I can't thank him enough for his kindness. He didn't complain of my speed at work ,didn't speak ill of me and others and patiently taught me how to work in our company. Moreover, he gave me 100 yen to buy something to drink in severe (very hot or cold) weather.
Thank you for reading.
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