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Shopping Hi everyone! I can't write anything because of my school. Today, I went shopping. In past I said I didn't like went shopping but over time I start to like that. I suppose, I am similar to other girls :D. Men always say girls like shopping and that's true. Of course there are some exceptional girls don't like shopping. But we are in majority :D. Anyway, when I go shopping, I want to buy almost all clothes. Unfortunately I can't because I haven't much money. Nevertheless, I can buy what I want. And when I go shopping, I buy a few clothes but I go shopping frequently. Of course I go shopping when there is discount because I can buy more clothes in this way :D. Finally, as I say all the time, it's very difficult that to be woman...

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 I can't write often because of my school.

In the past I said I didn't like to go shopping but over time I've started to like that.

Of course there are some exceptional girls who don't like shopping.

But we are the majority :D

And (not supposed to start sentences with "and" ;) ) when I go shopping, I buy a few clothes but I go shopping frequently.

Of course I go shopping when there is discount a sale (more general) because I can buy more clothes in this way :D

Finally, as I say all the time, it's very difficult that to be woman... (a little hard to understand the meaning of this sentence)


I feel the same way. I love shopping, but I don't go often because I usually don't have money. Also, I think that it gets boring quickly.

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Shopping

Hi everyone! I can't write anything because of my school. Today, I went shopping. In past I said I didn't like went shopping before but over time I start to like that. I suppose, I am similar to other girls :D. Men always say girls like shopping and that's true. Of course there are some exceptional girls who don't like shopping. But we are in the majority :D. Anyway, when I go shopping, I want to buy almost all clothes all the clothes. Unfortunately I can't because I haven't don't have that much money. Nevertheless, I can buy what I want. And when every time I go shopping, I buy a few clothes but I go shopping frequently. Of course I go shopping when there is discounts because I can buy more clothes in this way :D. Finally, as I say all the time, it's very difficult that to be a woman...

 

who can't be dropped when it leads a sentence;"haven't" is not equal as "have no";"it's difficult that"should be followed by sentence not infinitive.

hope I could be helpful.

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