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Spring!!! The real spring weather became at last here. its so nice - warm weather and sunny days after cold, rainy and snowy winter. I went to my dacha this Saturday. Its so nice there now - the stream run nearby, and a lot of snowdrops are blooming on its bank. and sound the songs of birds loudly.I was walking along the stream a bit, and sitting on a stump looking on the run water and hearing songs of birds. then I noticed a big lepus running in my side. I tried to take a pics of him, but he noticed me and run away quickly. And the crocuses have blossom near my dacha -its so beautiful !

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Spring!!!

Real spring weather has arrived here, at last. Its so nice to have warm weather and sunny days after a cold, rainy and snowy winter. I went to my dacha last Saturday. Its was so nice there - the stream is running nearby, a lot of Snowdrops are blooming on its bank and bird songs sound loudly. I was walking along the stream a bit, sitting on a tree stump looking at the running water and listening to the songs of birds. Then I noticed a big hare. (running in my side?). I tried to take a pictures of him, but he noticed me and ran away quickly. The Crocuses have blossomed near my dacha - its so beautiful!

 

Good writing. Spring in Ukraine must be so nice!

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Spring!!!

The real spring weather became here at last here. It's so nice - warm weather and sunny days after cold, rainy and snowy winter. I went to my dacha this Saturday. It's so nice there now - the stream runs nearby, and a lot of snowdrops are blooming on its bank, and sound the songs of birds loudly.I was walking along the stream a bit, and sitting on a stump looking onto the running water and hearing the songs of birds. Then I noticed a big Lepus running by my side. I tried to take a pics of him, but he noticed me and quickly ran away quickly. ,
and the Crocuses have blossomed near my dacha -it's so beautiful!

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Ah i can see how much you like Spring! Haha it's my favorite season! Anywho, the things to note is you always capitalize words after any punctuation (?,!,.) and, also capitalize the names. (e.g - Crocuses). As for the sentence in blue, i would phrase it like this "and the sounds of birds singing loudy." It can't really explain it ><.

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