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The Thing I Cherish Most The Thing I cherish most is the relationship with my parents. 　　Now, the generation gap has become a very serious problem. One concept of the generation gap is that parents and offspring have different values and beliefs,so now I think having a better relationship is a very important thing. 　　I have a good relationship with my parents . They respect my ideas. We often communicate with each other if we have different views. My parents are like my friends; I often tell them about my difficulties and they will share their experience with me. My parents teach me how to become a good person. They told me that time is what we want the most and what we use the worst,also to be big enough to admire the abilities of people who are better than you are. They will also encourage me on my study.They told me to be calm and not to be afraid of stress, No on can be perfect in everything. So that’s the thing I cherish most.

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The Thing I Cherish Most

The Thing I cherish most is the relationship with my parents.
　　Now, the generation gap has become a very serious problem. One concept of the generation gap is that parents and offspring have different values and beliefs,so now I think having a better relationship is a very important thing.
　　I have a good relationship with my parents . They respect my ideas. We often communicate with each other if we have different views. My parents are like my friends; I often tell them about my difficulties and they will share their experience with me. My parents teach me how to become a good person. They told me that time is what we want the most and what we use the least, also to be big enough to admire the abilities of people who are better than you are. They will also encourage me on my study. They told me to be calm and not to be afraid of stress, No on can be perfect in everything.
So that’s the thing I cherish most.

 

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The Thing I Cherish Most

The Thing I cherish most is the relationship with my parents.
　　Now, the generation gap has become a very serious problem. One concept of the generation gap is that parents and offspring have different values and beliefs,so now I think having a better relationship is a very important thing.


　　I have a good relationship with my parents. They respect my ideas. We often communicate with each other if/when we have different views. My parents are like my friends; I often tell them about my difficulties and then they will share their experience with me. My parents teach me how to become a good person. They told/tell me that time is what we want the most and what we but use the worst, also to be big enough to admire the abilities of people who are better than you we are. They will also encourage me on in my study.They told/tell me to be calm and not to be afraid of stress, no one can be perfect in everything.  (Just two points: you are jumping around person me/you/we and also tense told/tell/will encourage/will share... as much as possible try to stick to one)

So that’s the thing this is what I cherish most.

 

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