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My Spring Break For Chinese Class in school, my teacher wants us to write about our Spring Break. This is what I wrote: 春假期间,我有很多乐趣,但也研究了很多。我的兄弟春假回家的时候,他带我去了很多好玩的地方。他开车送我买波霸和玩视频游戏经营场所,称为第1轮。在复活节那天,我爸教我怎么开车。对于剩下的春假期间,我做我的功课,叫 Round 1。我研究美国历史,生物,英语,微积分AB。去年的春假是今年的一样。明年,我还打算做同样的有一点点的乐趣,也为学校学习。我不期待像我一样做的暑假,春假期间。 What I wanted to say: During Spring Break, I had a lot of fun but also studied a lot. My brother came back home for Spring Break and he took me to many fun places. He drove me to buy boba and to play at a video game arcade called Round 1. On Easter Day, my dad taught me how to drive. For the rest of Spring Break, I did my homework and studied for my AP exams. I studied United States history, biology, English, and Calculus AB. Last year's Spring Break is the same as this year's. Next year, I also plan on doing the same by having a little bit of fun and also studying for school. I don't look forward to Spring Break as much as I do for Summer Break.

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The “boba(波霸)” in china is “珍珠奶茶(bubble—tea)”, if u just type “波霸” that the chinese suppose can not understand whan u really mean.
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good student!
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My Spring Break

For Chinese Class in school, my teacher wants us to write about our Spring Break. This is what I wrote:

这个春假期间,我过得非常有趣,也学到了很多东西。有很多乐趣,但也研究了很多。我的兄弟春假回家的时候,他带我去了很多好玩的地方。他开车送我去买波霸,和我们还在玩一个叫做“第1轮“的视频游戏经营场所里玩。称为第1轮。在复活节那天,我爸教我怎么开车。在春假其余的时间里,对于剩下的春假期间,我做我的功课和准备我的AP课程考试。叫 Round 1。我学习研究美国历史,生物,英语,微积分AB。去年的春假和今年的春假我几乎过得一样。明年,我还是同样打算注意做点有趣的事情做同样的有一点点的乐趣,当然也会学习学校的功课为学校学习。我并不期望我春假做的事情能跟我暑假做的事情一样。我不期待像我一样做的暑假,春假期间。

What I wanted to say:
During Spring Break, I had a lot of fun but also studied a lot. My brother came back home for Spring Break and he took me to many fun places. He drove me to buy boba and to play at a video game arcade called Round 1. On Easter Day, my dad taught me how to drive. For the rest of Spring Break, I did my homework and studied for my AP exams. I studied United States history, biology, English, and Calculus AB. Last year's Spring Break is the same as this year's. Next year, I also plan on doing the same by having a little bit of fun and also studying for school. I don't look forward to Spring Break as much as I do for Summer Break.

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春假期间,我有很多乐趣我玩的很开心,但也研究了很多有很认真的学习。我的兄弟哥哥春假回家的时候,他带我去了很多好玩的地方。他开车送我买波霸和玩视频游戏经营场所,称为第1轮。在复活节那天,我爸教我怎么开车。对于剩下的春假期间,我做我的功课,叫 Round 1。我研究美国历史,生物,英语,微积分AB。去年的春假是今年的一样。明年,我还打算做同样的有一点点的乐趣的事,也为学校学习做铺垫。(我不期待像我一样做的暑假像春假期间一样)?。

 

有些地方语序不对,我没怎么看懂你想表达的意思。


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My Spring Break

For Chinese Class in school, my teacher wants us to write about our Spring Break. This is what I wrote:

春假期间,我有很多乐趣,但也研究了很多我玩的很好,同时也学习了很多东西。我的兄弟春假回家的时候,放春假时我兄弟也回家了,他带我去了很多好玩的地方。他开车送我买波霸和玩视频游戏经营场所,称为第1轮他开车带我去买boba,还去叫Round1的娱乐中心玩视频游戏。在复活节那天,我爸教我怎么开车。对于剩下的春假期间利用剩余的时间,我做我的功课我完成了家庭作业并为AP考试进行了复习,叫 Round 1。我还研究美国历史,生物,英语,微积分AB。去年的春假是和今年的一样。明年,我还打算做同样的有一点点的乐趣我同样打算做一点有乐趣的活动,也为学校学习也学习一些学校的课程。我不期待像我一样做的暑假,春假期间我不希望在春假和暑假做同样的事情。

 

What I wanted to say:
During Spring Break, I had a lot of fun but also studied a lot. My brother came back home for Spring Break and he took me to many fun places. He drove me to buy boba and to play at a video game arcade called Round 1. On Easter Day, my dad taught me how to drive. For the rest of Spring Break, I did my homework and studied for my AP exams. I studied United States history, biology, English, and Calculus AB. Last year's Spring Break is the same as this year's. Next year, I also plan on doing the same by having a little bit of fun and also studying for school. I don't look forward to Spring Break as much as I do for Summer Break.

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