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IELTS-11 TITLE: Some people think that teachers at school are more responsible for children’s intellectual and social development than parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What is your personal opinion? Who should assume more responsibility for children’s intellectual and social development, the parents or the teachers, has been a heated debate. I tend to believe that they have the same share of responsibility to cultivate children’s intellectual and social skills. Teachers can provide professional guidance for children’s development in both intellectual and social aspects. The fundamental reason lies in that it is compulsory that teacher would get systematic training from professional associations before entering into the field as a teacher. Therefore, when imparting knowledge, teachers are more likely to apply the acquired methodology by means of the well-designed textbooks into the teaching process. As a result, gradually and unconsciously, children can acquire skills that are beneficial for enhancing their intellectual abilities. In addition to that, teacher’s role in promoting children’s social skill cannot be ignored. This is due to the fact that most teachers are pretty skilled at utilizing resources around to boost children’s social development. However, parent’s influence on children’s intellectual and social development should not be underestimated. The primary reason is that, in most circumstances, children begin to realize the society by imitating the way of thinking of their parents as well as their behaviors. As time passes, such practice would become deeply rooted in their minds and even, to a large extent, become a part of their habits. Therefore, I strongly believe that both teachers and parents are well-advised to be obligated for children’s intellectual and social development, as they have the equally important influence on children’s development.

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(3am over here,sorry if there's many mistakes...extremely tired!) Hi Mandy,Interesting thought provoking topic.However i believe teachers should not be more responsible for children's intellectual development than adults.I think its a combination of parents and teachers working together that should develop a child.I believe a teachers role should be to identify a child's strengths,weaknesses "gifts" or "talents a child may might posses". Not just identify talents but point them in the right direction. Teachers are important but the parent has so much say into a child's life from birth to adulthood i.e. friends, other influences,what they read,watch etc. Although i believe parents are slightly more important overall.I think a great teacher is invaluable.We need more of them! - 巧克力 -Kay

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