Li Lei’s busy day
It was March 8th yesterday, yesterday is Li Lei’s busy day, he was to do many housework.
In the morning he was got to the shopping, and he was bought some of vegetables and fruits.
In the afternoon, he was swept the kitchen’s floor.
In the evening , he had cooking the dinner before his mother arrived home.
And his mother very glad that the boy to do a lot of things.
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Li Lei’s busy day
It was March 8th yesterday. It was a busy day for Li Lei, he was to do many a lot of housework.
In the morning he was got to the went shopping, and he was bought some of vegetables and fruits.
In the afternoon, he was swept the kitchen’s floor.
In the evening, he had was cooking the dinner before his mother arrived home.
And his mother was very glad that the boy to do did a lot of things.
"...yesterday is Li Lei’s busy day" should be "...yesterday was Li Lei’s busy day", but that still sounds really strange. It sounds much better as "Yesterday was a busy day for Li Lei." I changed 'yesterday' to 'it' because you were already talking about yesterday.
"He was to do many much housework" could also work, but I think 'had to do' and/or 'a lot of' are a little more colloquial.
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