On duty day
It’s my turn to be on duty today. Today is on Tuesday in April 22, and the weather is sunny day. Jim isn’t come to school today, because he has been to USA last week, he has a very nice holiday in the USA. Lucy picked up a book that was I losed the one in the library. Then I gived back the book to library. The teacher WANG told me :” you have to more carefully in the other days.” And I return the classroom have a talk with Lucy thanks her very much.
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On duty day
It’s my turn to be on duty today. Today is on Tuesday, in April 22, and the weather is sunny day. Jim isn’t coming to school today, because he went to the USA last week. He had a very nice holiday in the USA. Lucy picked up the book that was I lost the one in the library. Then I gave back the book to the library. The teacher WANG told me :” you have to more carefully on the other days*.” And I returned to the classroom to have a talk with Lucy to thanks her very much a lot.
*I don't know what you mean by "in the other days".
"...because he went to the USA last week" could also be "...because he has been to the USA in the last week"
You could replace 'gave back' with 'returned' if you want.
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who can help me to point the mistakes?
谁能帮我改病句，谢谢。
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