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Dear friend, I want to talk you about the city in which I live (or: talk to you about my hometown). It is a beautiful, flourishing and young city (or: it's a beautiful, 'blossoming', modern city) - it's name is 'Astana'. Astana is the youngest capital city in the world. It became the capital in 1997, and has already achieved much a great deal of success. Astana is growing very fast (or: at a rapid rate) and every day are built a new buildings are built. Astana boasts an lovely design. The streets are planted so many trees and flowers that have a different forms. The streets are lined with trees and flowers. Built Many entertainment centres have been built, where you can relax and have a good time. Many tourists love this city and they and enjoy the beauty of this city. Many things have happened in over a short space of  time for Astana. One of the highlights is was the OSCE summit, which held in 2010. Bayterek Tower is a symbol of the city and it has it's own story. That's all I wanted to say. I want to you to take a look at Astana for yourself.

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Dear friend, I want to talk to you about the city in which i live [better: ...the city I live in]. It is a beautiful, flourishing and young city-Astana. Astana is the youngest capital city in the world. It became the capital in 1997 and has already achieved much success [better: ...has already been very successful]. Astana is growing very fast and every day new buildings are built. Astana boasts a lovely design [better: Astana is beautifully designed]. The streets are planted with many trees and flowers in different forms [better: the streets are beautifully landscaped]. There are many entertainment centres where you can relax and have a good time. Many tourists love this city and they enjoy the beauty of the city [better: ...enjoy its beauty]. Many things happened in a short time for Astana. One of the highlights is the OSCE summit which was held in 2010. Bayterek tower is a symbol of the city and it has its own story. That's all I wanted to say. I want you to see Astana.

Отлично, Мурат! Молодец. Мне хочется посетить когда-нибудь ваш крутую столицу!