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As is depicted in the chart, in 1970, the birth rate in India is the highest among these five countries, which are including India, Thailand, Mexico, Spain and Somalia. At the same time, Mexico had the lowest birth rate that was a little bit higher than 2 percent.
After two decades, in 2000, the birth rates of these five countries changed quite much. The Somalia's birth rate was nearly 4.7 percent which was the highest in this country groups. However, the birth rate of India had dropped to approximate 3.2 percent, taking the second place in that of these countries.
Comparing the data divided by the time, there are several conclusions that we could make. First of all, most of these countries' birth rates had declined in this period except Somalia and Mexico. Second, the birth rate of Mexico remained the same as nearly 2.1 percent from 1970 to 2000. Third, Somalia was the only country whose birth rate occurred to increase among these five countries.
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