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My university life just a mess The new term has been started ,but something came up at my life,i feel so sad..i don't know why,i have already became a decadent person, i just stayed in the dormitory to on the internet,or playing PC games so on...i can't feel some interesting anymore..this situation has been lasted for two months..but i know i need more time to make me feel good..i trust that time is the best cure.....

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My university life is just a mess.

The new term has been started, but something has come up in came up at my life, I feel so sad and don't know why.

I have already became a decadent person, I just stayed in the dormitory to on the internet, or playing PC games and so on...I can't feel some interesting interest in anything anymore.

This situation has been lasted for two months, but I know I need more time to make myself me feel better good.

I trust that time is the best cure.....

 

 

 

I hope you start to feel better :)

 

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谢谢你的建议 :)
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写得不错!Carol的建议很好。不过,我们不常说“decadent。”我觉得“indulgent”比较好,“lazy”更常用(比较随便的)。“dorm”比“dormitory”也好听一点。 我也有时候跟你一样,什么都不想要做。希望你高兴一点!

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