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Study English Today is March 27,I am learning English for two hours.I think study English is very difficult.I don't konw how to study English.Just then,I meet a new friend Miss Lizzie Chu,I'm glad to see her!

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Today is March 27. I am studying English for two hours and it is very difficult. I don't know how am I going to study it but then, I'm so glad to meet a new friend and her name is Miss Lizzie Chu.

~ Avoid redundacy. If you can put all the details in on sentence, just do it :) It's much better. ^^

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Studying English

It is March 27th. I am studying English for two hours. I think learning English is very difficult. I don't know how to study English. Just now, I met a new friend, Miss Lizzie Chu; I'm glad to meet her!

 

English is not hard to study; it just needs patience and persistence! Keep it up and you'll be there in no time!

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It should be 'I have been studying' not 'I am studying'. This is because it is happening now, but started in the past!
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Read English out loud to yourself, even if you do not understand the English. This will help you get used to moving your mouth as a Westerner would. That is one way to reduce your accent. As for vocabulary and idioms, Miss Chu sounds like she can help you well and the italki community seems to be a good place to get help if you write a question or note. Wish you well!! Troy
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Study English

Today is March 27,I am learning English for two hours.I think study English is very difficult.I don't konw how to study English.Just then,I meet a new friend Miss Lizzie Chu,I'm glad to see her!

 

My stab at it:

 

Today is March 27th, I've been studying English for two hours. I think that studying English is very difficult. I don't know which is the best way to study it but, right while I was reflecting upon this, I met a new friend, Miss Lizzie Chu. I'm so glad to see her.

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