Urine in my bed
My cat was urine in my bed last night. The quilt was so stink. I went to Coin-operated laundry to wash my quilt. I I wish she won't be urine in my clean quilt again!!!!!
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Urine in my bed
My cat peed* in my bed last night. The quilt stank. I went to a coin-operated lauderette to wash my quilt. I hope she doesn't pee on my clean the quilt again!
*The tone of your piece is quite informal. 'Urinate' is a rather scientific term, so I did not think it fit the context well.
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Urine in my bed
My cat was urine urinated in my bed last night. The quilt was so stinky. I went to Coin-operated laundry to wash my quilt. I wish she won't be urine urinate in my clean quilt again!!!!!
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