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A lucky day Hi guys. Today, I want to share you about my lucky story.Well,Maybe it's not so lucky for person who's not interested in K-singer. But it's precious for me because I'm kpop fans LOL Yesterday,I took the high school examination in the university which located in the center of city(Bangkok).This school is the most famous high school in Thailand. Of course, there were a great number of students who want to enter this school, yeah, me too. The test was included English,Thai and Social. It was so difficult for me. I took the exam until 3.30 pm. So I was exhausted. During the way back home, I must walk across the shopping mall. It was crowded with a hundred people were watching something. They shounted very lound and said 'opppaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa ' like this. At that time,I was curious ,so I walked there. Unbelieveable thing was happened!!!! two-handsome guys were sitting on the stage. They are TVXQ !!!!!!!!!! I was shock shock and shock........ I didn't feel tired any more. Just paid attention to the show. Finally, I arrived home at 6pm =_= ..... This is one of an unexpectedly experience in my life. I'm not good at story telling,so sorry (_ _")

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A lucky day

Hi guys. Today, I want to share you about my lucky story with you. Well, maybe it's not so lucky for person who's not interested in K-singer, but it's precious for me because I'm kpop fans LOL

Yesterday, I took the high school examination in the university, which is located in the center of city(Bangkok). This school is the most famous high school in Thailand. Of course, there were a great number of students who want to enter this school - yeah, me too. The test was included English, Thai and Social. It was so difficult for me. I took the exam until 3.30 pm, so I was exhausted. On the way back home, I had to walk across the shopping mall. It was crowded with a hundred people, who were watching something. They shounted very loudly and said 'opppaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa ', like this. At that time, I was curious, so I walked there. An unbelieveable thing was happened!!!! Two-handsome guys were sitting on the stage. They are TVXQ !!!!!!!!!! I was in shock shock and shock........ I didn't feel tired any more. Just paid attention to the show. Finally, I arrived home at 6pm =_= .....

This is one of an unexpectedly experience in my life. I'm not good at story telling,so sorry (_ _")

 

[You are better at storytelling than you think.  Not bad at all.  Remember to leave spaces after periods and commas, not before them.]

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