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A moment of high drama in my life (please correct)
At a nearby school someone once threatened with a bomb attack. That morning I wanted to go shopping and had to go along the street where the school was, the same road the attacker was threatening. The same morning I turned on the TV and saw a report about this incident. On the news they said that they were still looking for the assassin perpetrator and that they had no idea who it could be. Then I went shopping and walked along the street where the school was, there were journalists filming and the police were investigating. In the evening I watched the news again and the anchor woman said that the assassin perpetrator was a student at the school and that this student never intended to blow up the school. He only wanted to frighten everyone.
About this event My thoughts on this incident are as follows:I think that the schools perhaps demand too much from the students. I consider this as a cry for help. It shows that the pressure to deliver good results is too high for the students nowadays. One thing comes to leads to another: a bad family situation, pressure to perform, or perhaps even a trauma. But I do not think that it is a cry for help if someone runs amok. For me there is a difference between killing people and showing that something went is wrong.
Very Kind Regards
Lorenz
A moment of high drama in my life (please correct)
At a nearby school someone once threatened with a bomb attack.
Someone threatened a nearby school with a bomb threat.
At this morning I wanted to go shopping and had to go along the street where the school was, which the attacker was threatening.
In the morning I wanted to go shopping but would have to go along the street where the school is, which the attacker was threatening.
At this morning I turned on the TV and saw a report about this incident.
In the morning-
On the news they said that they were still looking for the assassin and that they had no idea who it could be.
Then I went shopping and walked along the street where the school was is, there were journalists filming and the police were investigating.
In the evening I watched again the news and the anchor woman said that the assassin was a student of this school and that this student never intended to blow up the school.
I watched the news again
He only wanted to frighten everyone.
About this event I think that the schools perhaps demand too much from the students.
I consider this as a cry for help.
It shows that the pressure to deliver good results is too high for the students nowadays.
One thing comes to another: a bad family situation, pressure to perform, or perhaps even a trauma.
But I do not think that it is a cry for help if someone runs amok.
(Do you mean if a person Commits the crime? Instead of just threatening?)
For me there is a difference between killing people and showing that something went wrong.
Very Kind Regards
Lorenz
I feel that you have done a good job of expressing your ideas here.
Es klingt gut, besser als mein Deutsch. :P
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