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I am tired
Although I have few things to do everyday, I feel tired.
Maybe I am a little nervous in my workplace.
I am afraid of saying the wrong words to my colleagues which is completely different from the time when I was in my school, when I was free both in my spirit and myself.
I wanna to do so many things to make mysellf busy in fact, so I can relax my spirit at least and I can feel the time that passes so quickly. Also I can have more chances to communicate with all the people around me. The weekend flew and I will be in the boring life again.
I have a great expection on the next weekend! Jessica,come on. You can do it! I find it's a terrible thing to lack for friends around me! I really miss my friends.
I want to go back to school,and I wanna to end my intern time as soon as possible.
Now I am so looking forward to the time when I return to my lovely college,
when I have a hug with my friends,and I won't be shy.
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Nice essay. You do need to learn to end your complete thought and statement with a period, and to
abandon the habit of running sentences together by using commas in a repetitious manner.
Still, you wrote very well, and it was a very touching account of your state of affairs. Nicely done.--Warm Regards, Bruce
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