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It's a good day Today is Sunday.The weather is very good,and I have a good mood too. I have found a native engish speaking guy who are a soldier from internet.I had a happy chat with him.We talked about his experience in Afghanistan and talked about tattoos.His Mandarin is so good that we can talk in Chinese without a problem.But I still like speaking in English to pratice my english. And he introduced me to this italki website.I like this website so much.I belive it will give me more interests in learning english.Thinking of the fact that a lot of people from all over the world can read and correct my writing,I am so excited. It's too late now,I have to sleep. Hope tomorrow is another good day. I found I choosed the wrong language,so have to write it again in english.

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It's a good day

Today is Sunday. The weather is very good,and I have a good mood too.
On the internet, I have found a native engish speakering guy who areis a soldier. I had a happy chat with him. We talked about his experience in Afghanistan and talked about tattoos. His Mandarin is so good that we can talk in Chinese without a problem. But I still like speaking in English to pratice my english.
And He introduced me to this italki website. I like this website so much.I belive it will give make me more interested in learning english. Thinking of the fact that a lot of people from all over the world can read and correct my writing, I am so excited.
It's too late now, I have to sleep. Hope tomorrow is another good day.
I found I chose the wrong language, so have to write it again in English.

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Welcome to italki! Glad to see you here.
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It's a good day.

Today is Sunday.The weather is very good and I have am in a good mood too.
I have found a native engish speaking guy guy whos native language is English. who are He is a soldier  from I met on the internet. I had a happy chat with him. We talked about his experience in Afghanistan and talked about tattoos. His Mandarin is so good that we can talk in Chinese without a problem. But I still like speaking in English to further pratice my English.
And  He also introduced me to this italki website, italki. I like this website so much. I belive it will give me more interests in motivate me more to learning English. Thinking of the fact that a lot of people from all over the world can read and correct my writing ,I am makes me so excited.
It's too so late now, I have to sleep. Hope tomorrow is another good day.
I found I choosed chose the wrong language, so I have to write it again in English.

 

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