Oz the Great and Powerful

I saw the movie "Oz the Great and Powerful" tonight. This movie is about a man who has weak, greed personality . I do not like this role, but I think the scenery in that world is so beautiful. I do not very recommend this movie.

You can say it in this way instead: 

1. This movie is about a man who has a weak and greedy personality. 

2. This movie is about a man who is weak and has a greedy personality. 

3. This movie is about a man with a weak and greedy personality. 

Your English is good! o(^-^)o

我看过这个电影， 我也不喜欢！