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Correction in red. Stylistic changes in blue.
Why I am a Social Worker (In a title, the "important" words should be capitalized.)
I am a social worker because it is a good job for me where I can help people in need.
I am feeling useful being a social worker.
I enjoy helping people in difficulties and listening to their problems, and I like to try to find some solutions to resolve their problems. (solutions + resolve is redundant)
However, it's hard for me to be a social worker because we see poverty, problems, and difficulties daily, and it is sometimes difficult psychologically.
I like to help parents to improve their relationship with their children, and make them a smile.
For me, social work is a humanistic job.
I help different members of the public, such as people with disabilities, the elderly, orphans, women without a partner, and working people.
Your post was in a serious tone, so I changed the informal "kids" to the more formal "children".
You could say, "... such as the disabled, senior citizens, ..." You can also call the elderly, "senior citizens."
Why I am a Social Worker
I am a social worker because it is a good job for me where I can help people in need.
I am feeling useful being a social worker.
I enjoy helping people in difficulties and listening to their problems and I like to try to find solutions to their problems.
However, it's hard for me to be a social worker, because we see poverty, problems, and difficulties daily and it is sometimes difficult psychologycally.
I like to help parents to improve their relastionship with their children and make them a smile.
For me, Social worker is a humanistic job.
I help different members of the public, such as people with disabilities, the elderly, orphans, women without a partner, working people...
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