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Стихотворение 4 Последяя часть (наконец!) CHOCOLATE CAKE 4 i know, I'll wash the plate up, and the knife and put them away and maybe no one will notice, eh? So I do that and creep, creep,creep back to bed into bed doze off licking my lips with a lovely feeling in my belly Mmmmmmmmmmm. In the morning I get up, downstairs, have breakfast, Mum's saying, 'Have you got your dinner money?' and I say, 'Yes,' 'And don't forget to take some chocolate cake with you.' I stopped breathing 'What's the matter,' she says, 'you normally jump at chocolate cake?' I'm still not breathing, and she's looking at me very closely now. She's looking at me just below my mouth. 'What's that?' she says. 'What's what?' I say. 'What's that there?' 'Where?' 'There,'she says, pointing at my chin. 'I don't know,' I say. 'It looks like chocolate,' she says. 'It's not chocolate, is it?' No answer. 'Is it?' 'I don't know.' She goes to the cupboard looks in, up, top, middle, bottom, turns back to me. 'It's gone. It's gone, You haven't eaten it, have you?' 'I don't know.' 'You don't know. You don't know if you've eaten a whole chocolate cake or not? When? When did you eat it?' So I told her. and she said well what could she say? 'That's the last time I give you any cake to take to school. Now go. Get out no wait not before you've washed your dirty sticky face.' I went upstairs looked in the mirror and there it was, just below my mouth, a chocolate smudge. The give-away. Maybe she'll forget about it by next week.

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Good poem! Russian poet Afonasiy Fet wrote this poem: http://poem.com.ua/fet/na-zare-ty-ee-ne-budi.html This is poem and song.
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Thank You, but my English, considering impartial, leaves much to be desired. I am using my philological knowledge’s, as only thing that helps : )
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Спасибо, Esse., your English is good too. And your German, I have noticed
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This is not my day = Сегодня не мой день Don't worry , Your Russian is very good!
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Волнения!!! Как сказать по-русски 'THIS IS NOT MY DAY'?

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