Our haftseen
Yesterday was the first day of new year, it is 1392 solar calendar, we celebrate this by having a table calls Haftseen ( seven words that start with S in Persian) every year, these things are special things, one of them is Sabze (green vegetable, brunet), Samano ( a special food which makes from wheat), Sib(apple), Sir (garlic), Somagh(ُSumac), Serke(Vinegar) and Seke(coins) also there are small red alive fish, flowers, mirror, and lots of sweets and fruits each of them is a symbol, I share you my Haftseen for this year festival the picture was taken yesterday.
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Our haftseen
Yesterday was the first day of our new year, 1392 in the solar calendar. We celebrate this day by having a table called Haftseen ( seven words that start with S in Persian) every year. These things are special things; one of them is Sabze (green vegetable, brunet), Samano ( a special food made from wheat), Sib(apple), Sir (garlic), Somagh(ُSumac), Serke(Vinegar) and Seke(coins). There are also small red alive fish, flowers, mirror, and lots of sweets and fruits. Each of them is a symbol. I share with you my Haftseen for this year's festival. The picture was taken yesterday.
-Very interesting and well-written, but you need to use shorter sentences rather than combining separate thoughts into long ones.
-You only needed to use the word 'things' once in that sentence. It is implied afterwards.
-The use of 'live' and 'alive' is tricky. 'Live' is an attributive adjective, and is used before the noun 'fish'. 'Alive' is a predicate adjective and is used after the word ('the small red fish are alive')
-A question--what is the purpose of the doll?
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kam fahmeidam harfato..................................
barat darkhast add dadam.........
baram matne farseisho befrest,,,,,,,,,,,,!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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I wrote about my Norooz, Sadegh, it is how was my Norooz and my Haftseen not about that one you are talking about, by the way I am sorry for those with that condition you told.
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kashkei ein vaghtei ke gozashtei ke ein matno beneveisei mozosho darbareye kasaei meineveshtei ke barshoun eyd neist va sle jadeideshoun mese bagheiye slashoune yanei hich tagheirei nemeikonan yanei sharayet barashoun jorei neist ke tagheir konan.............lope harf::az badbakhtei meineveshtei ke eydo hichi haleish nemeishe!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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