The life
What is life ? Life is a empty cup.You can add angthing into the cup,sweet,bad feeling and depressed.However.your attitude like plain water.How many you pour into the cup where is full of feeling have decide your quality of life.You can decrease density of sad .Of course,you can increase density of happly.Finally the cup is full of a kind of feeling,but the all in the cup will became your asset.
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Life "The Life" would not sound right in this context.
What is life? Life is an empty cup. You can add anything into the cup: sweet, bad feeling ["bad feeling does not sound right here. Maybe "sad" or "painful"] or depressing. However, your attitude is like plain water. How much you pour into the cup that [or "which"] is full of feeling decides your quality of life. You can decrease the density of the sad. Of course, you can increase the density of the happy. Finally the cup is full of a kind of feeling, but everything in the cup will become your gain. [The word "asset" is not wrong to use, but it is usually used for other kinds of things.]
Nice paragraph! :)
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The life
What is life ? Life is an empty cup.You can add angthing into the cup,sweet,bad feeling and depressed.However,your attitude will be like plain water. As much as you pour into the cup which is full of feelings, and it will decide the quality of your life.You can decrease density of sadness. Of course,you can increase density of happiness as well. Finally the cup is full of all kind of feelings,but every emotion in the cup will became your asset.
It was deep, real deep :)
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Life is the cap that always full. There are no voids in it and never ever have been :)
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