Did you ask me about love? Huh ...
His friends were jealous of him;
he's got her and they don't.
He could do anything with her but he chose to stay away from her. Not get too attached.
They didn't understand why, why he pushed her away and didn't give her everything she wanted.
She was worth everything in the world but he didn't treat her like that.
They didn't understand, no one did.
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Did you ask me about love? Huh ...
His friends were jealous of him;
he's got her and they don't.
He could do anything with her, but he chose to stay away from her and not get too attached.
They didn't understand why, why he pushed her away and didn't give her everything she wanted.
She was worth everything in the world, but he didn't treat her like that.
They didn't understand - no one did.
[Excellent. In the last sentence, I put a dash (-) because there would be more of a pause when you spoke it and that's when you use a dash.]
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Hi Manuela. I think the only change I would make is: "Not to get too attached". Everything else looks fine to me.
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