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Letter to a friend. Please correct this letter for me. Dear George, As we haven't seen each other for a long time now, I decided to write you a letter. I have been living in Mayen now for 2 years. Mayen is a nice little town near Koblenz. In summer they have always open-air theatre plays. I visited a Shakespeare play this summer and it was very funny, because only one man played all roles. Next week we are going to visit a fair in Trier, but it isn't a normal fair it is all about the middle ages. When we moved here to Mayen I started to work as a gardener but meanwhile the job became so boring that I stopped working there. At the moment I read a lot of books, for example Bill Bryson's Notes from a Small Island. It is very funny and well written. The story goes about the author himself and what he experienced travelling around in England. There's a new film in the cinemas. It is a 3D film and it is called Hänsel und Gretel. I have watched it together with my girlfriend and the film was really great. It is about the two people from this ferrytale, but in the film they are already adults and hunt witches. It is an action film and the special effects are really great. One time a bullet from a gun came directly out of the screen and it felt as if it would reach me within every moment. Last year we were on holidays in the Netherlands, but this year we will perhaps go to the German North Sea. We want to rent a holiday house for one week. I hope that the rain will take a break for that week. I hope we can visit each other soon. Very kind regards. Lorenz

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Letter to a friend. Please correct this letter for me.

Dear George,

As we haven't seen each other for a long time now, I decided to write you a letter. I have been living in Mayen now for 2 years. Mayen is a nice little town near Koblenz. In the summer they always  have open-air theatre plays. I visited a Shakespeare play this summer and it was very funny, because only one man played all the roles. Next week we are going to visit a fair in Trier, but it isn't a normal fair: it is all about the middle ages. When we moved here to Mayen I started to work as a gardener but eventually the job became so boring that I stopped working there. At the moment I read a lot of books. For example, Bill Bryson's "Notes from a Small Island". It is very funny and well written. The story is about the author himself and what he experienced travelling around in England.

There's a new film in the cinemas. It is a 3D film and it is called Hänsel und Gretel. I have watched it together with my girlfriend and the film was really great. It is about the two people from this fairytale, but in the film they are already adults and hunt witches. It is an action film and the special effects are really great. One time a bullet from a gun came directly out of the screen and it felt as if it would reach me within every moment.

Last year we were on holidays in the Netherlands, but this year we will perhaps go to the German North Sea. We want to rent a holiday house for one week. I hope that the rain will take a break for that week.

I hope we can visit each other soon.

Very kind regards,
Lorenz

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