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The first but not the best ! My given name is Mohsen and I was born in Tehran on eleventh of June in 1987.I am last born child in my family.At first, my major was mechanical engineering but during the education I went through a terrible personal crisis. I tried hard to cope with it but I wasn't tactful enough so I had to leave my study unfinished and dropped out after a couple of years,wasting the years which could have been best years of my life.Anyway, those years passed but now here I am and I want to start over.Actually I did.I have already started to study another major,English translation. I am really hopeful about turning myself into a better person who I used to be. I have made too many mistakes in my whole life but I think I have learned my lessons... Although there are still too many unanswered questions for me, I'm not frustrated .I try to do my best ... just try to get know myself and face the reality and be brave and responsible towards them...I hope so.

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The first but not the best !

My given name is Mohsen and I was born in Tehran on the eleventh of June in 1987. I am the last born child in my family. At first, my major was mechanical engineering, but during the my education I went through a terrible personal crisis. I tried hard to cope with it, but I wasn't tactful successful enough so I had to leave my studies unfinished and dropped out after a couple of years,wasting the years which could have been the best years of my life. Anyway, those years are passed, but now here I am and I want to start over. Actually, I did. I have already started to study another major, English translation.
I [am really hopeful about turning myself into a better person who I used to be][really want to be a better person] . I have made [too many][a lot of] mistakes in my whole life, but I think I have learned my lessons... Although there are still too many unanswered questions for me, I'm not frustrated. I try to do my best ... just try to get know myself and [face the reality and be brave and responsible][bravely face the future] towards them...I hope so.

 

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