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它到了,它到了!!It's here, it's here!! 啊啊啊,现在我太开心了! 看吧!我的去力宏演唱会的门票到了!我等了五年有机会去听他唱歌,现在因为我在手里有门票,终于感觉这是真实的。我真的会去力宏演唱会!! Agghh, I'm so happy right now! Look! My Leehom ticket is here! I've waited 5 years to for the chance to hear him sing live. Now with the ticket in my hands, it finally seems real. I'm really going to a Leehom concert!!

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我也超级喜欢他~
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它到了,它到了!!It's here, it's here!!

啊啊啊,现在我太开心了! 看吧!我的去力宏演唱会的门票到了!我等了五年有机会去听他唱歌,现在因为我在手里有门票,终于感觉这是真实的。我真的会去力宏演唱会!!

 

啊啊啊,现在我太开心了! 你看!我的力宏演唱会门票到了!我等了五年有机会去听他唱歌,现在門票就在我手裡,终于感到这是真实的。我真的会去力宏演唱会!!

 


Agghh, I'm so happy right now! Look! My Leehom ticket is here! I've waited 5 years to for the chance to hear him sing live. Now with the ticket in my hands, it finally seems real. I'm really going to a Leehom concert!!

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Sorry 我等了五年有机会去听他唱歌 should have a full stop after it, not a comma!
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它到了,它到了!!It's here, it's here!!

啊啊啊,我现在太开心了! 看 !我王力宏演唱会的门票到了,我等了五年才有机会去听他唱現場.现在我手里握著门票,才终于感觉到这是真实的,我真的要去力宏演唱会了!!

Agghh, I'm so happy right now! Look! My Leehom ticket is here! I've waited 5 years to for the chance to hear him sing live. Now with the ticket in my hands, it finally seems real. I'm really going to a Leehom concert!!

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恭喜你!我也挺喜欢王力宏的歌呢.

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