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Homework ! Last year we planed go to Morro Of San Pablo. This place is a beautiful island situated in the north of Brazil. We left Argentina a raining day with our old car. In the middle of the way, we had a big problem: a robber stole us. He took pur car, money and clothe. Dispite of this, we decided to continue our trip walking. Our first night, we went to a small restaurant, near the route, for some food. We had to explain what happened us to the restaurant owner and he was kind and offered us a big meal. When Juli went to the bathroom, he found a bag a took it. He told us, that the bag was full of money and immediately we left the restaurant without explanations to the kind man. After that, we walked until the morning and we arrived to a big city. There, we bought clothe, and we rented a luxurious car. Also, we accommodated in the best hotel of the city and there, was the robber and stole us again ! We had to come back to our house walking and some car in the route, picked up us some kilometres. We couldn´t enjoy our planed holidays, but today, remember this situation with laughs. It was a really adventure for us.

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Homework !

Last year we planed go to Morro Of San Pablo. This place is a beautiful island situated in the north of Brazil.

We left Argentina on a raining rainy day with our old car. In the middle of the way our trip, we had a big problem: a robber stole from us. He took pur the car, our money and clothes. Dispite of this, we decided to continue our trip walking.
Our The first night, we went to a small restaurant, near the route (as in highway? if so I would change to "near the road" or "near the highway"), for some food. We had to explain what happened to us to the restaurant owner, and he was kind and offered us a big meal.
When Juli went to the bathroom, he found a bag and took it. He told us, that the bag was full of money and immediately we left the restaurant without explanations to the kind man. After that, we walked until the morning and we arrived to in a big city. There, we bought clothes, and we rented a luxurious car. Also, we accommodated stayed in the best hotel of in the city and there, was the robber! andHe stole from us again !

We had to come go back to our house walking and some a car in on the route, picked us up us some kilometres down the road.
We couldn´t enjoy our planed holidays, but today, remember this situation with laughs. It was a really adventure for us.

 

And WOW. That sounds like a really crazy trip. Meeting nice people, getting lucky, and unfortantly running into the same robber twice! Really fun story to read, great entry!

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Did this story really happen to you? I really enjoyed reading it :) Actually I don't really know who was and who wasn't lucky :) you? the thief? but, seriously, that's one good story :)

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