Short Story - A Rainy Day

One day, in the present of week, there was a the sky was espically blue-bright-clearand sunshine bright and blue. It was Marcell, a seventeen-year-old boy, whose name is Marcell, started his motorcycle and went to school, which is not so far from his house. He was wearing a white-gray uniform and a black helmet. As usual, he did not forget to bring his blue raincoat, because it was rainy season.

It was started after he went home from the school. In the middle of his going-home trip, it was raining cats and dogs. The road was flooded by water. He wore his blue raincoat and rode his motorcycle slowly because of the slippery road. Then he saw a young-beautiful girl, who did not wear her helmet and raincoat, rode riding her scooter very fast quickly. Marcell smiled and laughed when he saw the wet clothes of on her (Or change to "when he saw her wet clothes). She Her whose long-straight-black-haired, seemed so wet because of the rain. and Marcell saw her reddened-faced, which was caused by the heavy-big rain struck striking her beautiful-sweet face continuously during her whole a heavy-rain trip. But the girl, who wore pink-green clothes, did not care and still rode her scooter faster than Marcell did.

After coming into entering his renting-big house, he told his friends about the girl which he met, and suggested to his friends to use helmets and a raincoat, especially when it was raining. :-)

Awesome job Edu! I enjoyed reading the story, I'm not sure if I could do this in my non-native language just yet. I noticed that you use a lot of adjective+adjective combinations to describe things. Careful that you don't overuse them, what I normally do is describe something using one or two adjectives then adding more later on (like two sentences later) so that I don't overdo it. But besides that it's really good.