Can you help me please?

Could you please help me correct my friend's statement of purpose?

My friend will go abroad next year and she must write a statement of purpose (send to the university to chosen by the professor) to be sent to a professor at the University. So she asked me to help correct her document. She will study about Logistic & Supply Chain.

This is the original statement of purpose written by my friend. She doesn't have good English skills, and told me that she didn't write a draft in Thai for translation, she only wrote in English.

The world's population has been many increasing in big numbers in recent years. This issue has affected the industry for transportation of goods, which is highly important for managing businesses and responding to demand to the people consumer demands. Moreover, the world has been globalizing in the area of communication are which seems unlimited. The issue has become the provoked a change in key strategies for companies or individuals in order to achieve in the highly stay competitive and in this globalized world of capitalism. For this reason, I as a student of sociology and anthropology, am interested in Logistics and Supply Chain management which it are is directly involved in the demand for the ever increasing need for efficient transportaion of goods and services. I chose your institution for my academic studies with the main objective to expand my knowledge to help me achieve a successful future career. 

 Jeeji.  It was defficult to decipher the points that your friend was trying to get accross.  I tried my best and hope this helps.

Nowadays, there is an increasing number of people in society using some goods and transportation services. It is highly important in business to respond people’s needs. Moreover, the world has been globalizing so that areas of communication are unlimited. The issue has become the key strategy for a company or individual to achieve in the highly competitive and globalized world of capitalism. From the reasons stated above, I decided to apply a master’s degree (or I am interested) in Logistics and Supply Chain Management which involves with demand of directly persona to respond some goods and services sections. I chose your institute because I would like to study and practice this subject to expand my knowledge that will make a success of my career in the future.

And this is I trying to correct for her. (Some sentence I don't understand and didn't correct yet.)

Nowadays,There is an increasing number of people in society which affecting to use some goods and transportation services and it has a highly important in business to respond people’s needs. Moreover, the world has been globalizing that areas of communication are unlimited, The issue has become the key strategy for a company or individual to achieve in the highly competitive and globalized world of capitalism. From the reasons stated above, I decided to apply a master’s degree (or I am interested) in Logistics and Supply Chain Management which it’s involve with demand of directly persona to respond some goods and services sections. I choose your institute because I would like to study and practice this subject to expand my knowledge that will make a success of my career in the future.