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Topic:In some countries around the world men and women are havingchildren late in life.
What are the reasons for this development? What are the effects on society and family life?
Late to haveing babies seem to be prevalent in modern cities as men and women can live confortable and simple . Otherwise , they after work time are casual as before and probably having a busy and noisy life experience earlier .
In fact , young people who want to have babies earlier in most cites are reasonable,because a great number of them have a very busy jobs and have to confronted various pressures. To be more specific , most of them would suffered the pressure from career competition and desire to success in their works .Thus they do not have much time to have dating or get marry . Some parts of them perhap more perfer in chasing freedom , who do not like live in restrction .
Not surpringly , there are a variety of things waiting the young people to complete . But actually , havingchildren late in life are more harm than help for not only themselves but also on society . In individual , young people who having babies earlier better than they are older , in which young people have the condition of time and energry can affort the situation that babies always bother and plague their parents . Another for society , having babies late could cause an aging society ,that the city would lack of competitiveness , as a results , lower the productivty of the city .
In conclusion , people having babies later probably nice living situation and more free in persent , but this action are not for long term and somewhat harm for themselves when they are geting old ,besides , lower down the city interests.
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