Wendy 的小作文: Jun 02, 2010 Today is a good day ,i rest.so ,in the afternoon ,i got to buy some foods and vegetables.so i am cooking in my home. than,my friend Yangliu came to my home to paly with me. we

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Wendy 的小作文: Jun 02, 2010 Today is a good day ,i rest.so ,in the afternoon ,i got to buy some foods and vegetables.so i am cooking in my home. than,my friend Yangliu came to my home to paly with me. we had dinner together. After the after meal ,we talked about our work, we home ,,,than, i waterd my flowers.xixi

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Wendy 的小作文: Jun 02, 2010

Today was a good day , I had some rest.~~so ,~~ In the afternoon , I got to buy some foods and vegetables, so I am cooked ~~in my~~ at home. ~~than,~~ My friend Yangliu came to my home to paly with me. We had dinner together.
After the ~~after~~ meal ,we talked about our work, we went home ~~,,,~~ ...than, I watered my flowers.xixi

"After the after meal ,we talked about our work, we home(we home?)[ I thought you said you were home cooking and playing games?] ,,,than, i waterd my flowers.xixi"
[Maybe you meant he/she went home?]

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