Thank you in advance againn,this is a another report , i think it maybe slightly better than before.
The line gragh shows the birds population in Europe , measured in million , in the years between 1977 and 2001 .
As we can see , the gragh of birds population shows a fluctuated downward trend . In 1977 , it was about 120 million birds in Europe but in after three years it reached a peak of appximately 125 million . However , population was sharply decreased to about 98 million in 1986 , which 27 million lower than 6 years earlier . In 1989 , it was slightly rose back to 105 million and then droped to around 95 million in 1992 that 3 million lower than in 1986 . In the following years , population had increased a litter to 96 million in 1995 , besides , it was gradually decreased until 2001 , about 90 million birds , there was the lowest number of birds exist in Europe over this 24 years.
To sum up , birds population was peak of 125 million in 1980 and lowest was 90 million in 2001 , obviously , this was a downward trend of birds population .
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Thank you in advance. Again,this is a another report which I tthink may be slightly better than the one before.[ Graph analysis has to use scientific, precise language]
The line graph indicates the rise and fall of bird population in Europe , measured in millions , in the years between 1977 and 2001 . From the data, we notice a fluctuating downwards trend . In 1977 the graph indicates that there were an estimated 120 million birds in Europe and after three years, their population reached an estimated peak of 125 million. However , the bird population sharply decreased to approximately 98 million in 1986 , showing 27 million lower than 6 years earlier .
In 1989 , the population rose to 105 million and then dropped down to around 95 million in 1992, which was 3 million lower than in 1986 . In the following years , the bird population increased to 96 million in 1995. Then it gradually decreased until 2001 to approximately 90 million birds. This figure showed the lowest number of birds existing in Europe over 24 years.
In conclusion , the graph indicated that the birds' population peaked at 125 million in 1980 and was at its lowest at 90 million in 2001 showing the downward trend in the birds' population .
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