How to get a boyfriend in university(writing homework)1
(It is a little bit weird but this is my writing homework. I haven't decided how to write the first paragraph yet. I just wrote two paragraph. Actually it is difficult to finish 500-1000 words because I don't think there are skills for getting a boyfriend. Anyway, I will complete it asap.)
Join activity clubs after school and meet people there. You can’t stay at home all day waiting for a boy friend knock on your door. It is better to open your door first. But before you are ready to meet someone, please make sure which kind of boy you prefer and, make sure that he fits you. Try to make this step more effective and you’d better narrow your range. Join a tennis club if you like sports men or join a debate team to know some academic boys, in either way will you have a chance to meet your favorite type of boys.
But how to figure out which kind of boy fits you best? It is not easy because human-beings are the most complicated living things on the earth. Everyone has his own characteristics. So, before you choose your boy, you’d better get an analysis of yourself first. In that case will you get more assurance on which kind of boy better fits you. Then, make friends. Get to know them better to see if they are actually worth the effort. But don’t be too forward. Otherwise, don’t think too much. Just make more friends and get to know more people. Once you are comfortable around people, you’ll know the person is who you want. You may be frustrated if you still can’t find one. But you should remember that, good things are worth the wait.
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How to get a boyfriend at the University (writing homework)1
(It is a little bit weird but this is my writing homework. I haven't decided how to write the first paragraph yet. I just wrote two paragraphs. Actually, it is difficult to write 500-1000 words because I don't think there are any skills for getting a boyfriend. Anyway, I will complete it asap.)
Join activity clubs after school and meet people there. You can’t stay at home all day waiting for a boyfriend to knock on your door. It is better to open your door first. But before you are ready to meet someone, please make sure which kind of boy you prefer and make sure that he fits is a good fit you. Try to make this step more effective and you’d better narrow your range selection would be a better word). Join a tennis club if you like sporty men or join a debate team to meet some academic boys. Either way, you will have a chance to meet your favorite type of boy.
But how do you figure out which kind of boy fits you best? It is not easy because human beings are the most complicated living creatures on the earth. Everyone has their own characteristics. So, before you choose your boy, you’d better do an analysis of yourself first. This way you will get a better assurance about which type of boy could better fit you. Then, make friends. Get to know them better to see if they are actually worth the effort. But don’t be too agressive and don’t think too much. Just make more friends and get to know more people. Once you are comfortable around people, you’ll know the person is who you really want. You may be frustrated if you still can’t find one. But you should remember that, good things are worth waiting for!
Your homework is excellent. I really like your writing style and your English is near perfect. Good work Qiqi.
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你找一个男孩子（boy) 或是男人 (man)? 可能因为boyfriend有词boy你传泽要用词boy，可是我觉得声音很奇怪。比价好用significant other... 还有mate, soul-mate, sweetheart, etc...真说， 我觉得如果一个女人的生活很有意思，应该有一个男人对她有感觉。中国女人第一号的身体是她们的生活很无聊！
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Broken down, it means, "going away from your normal day into the many different activities which are present all around you."
the meanings of vast ocean and liveliness differ, but in the above sentence they mean:
vast ocean = many things to choose from
liveliness = activities (or boys)
and,
venture = go
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@jasonlascurain Thank you so much. But I didnt fully understand your sentence . . "venturing outside of your normal routine into vast ocean of liveliness all around you" .
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This may be a little late, but if you haven't done your initial paragraph, an idea would be to give an introduction to what your later 2 paragraphs will discuss. i.e. ". . . take a large step by venturing outside of your normal routine into vast ocean of liveliness all around you . . . But be careful, before you expose yourself to all that is out there, you should refine your search by distinguishing what type of partner would be your ideal match . . ." Then you can add a transition sentence at the beginning of each paragraph thereafter.
Just an idea... :)
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