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My weeken weekend.
I spent my this this weeken weekend together with my parent parents. They are retirement (retired at / live in) the small village where i was born and had a nice childhood there. I feel peaceful and happy to be together with them I spent a happy and peaceful time with them, cooked meals, talked told them about some problems i recently had at work from work last days. Their health doesn't seem seems not too fine good at the moment ,old ages make them slowly they got slower with age, forget something by brain forget lots of things. I have though hard about them (didn't understand what do u mean by this sentence) ,how to take care of them always even there are is not no any socials care for old people here. I coudnot couldn't leave my work to be them daily everyday. so sad.I love them so much I pray for them to stay be well and enjoy last life. I came back returned back to city at 5pm, cooked dinner, chat alittle a little with my friends, watch watched my favourist film and sleep then and finally went to bed. Well a new week ahead. I hope to have a happy week and work well for myself..Wish all friends here have a funny one too.
My weeken.
I spent my this my weekend together my parents. They are in retirement at the small village where i was born and had a nice childhood there. I feel peaceful and happy to be together with them - I ,cooked meals , talked with them about some recent problems from work last days.Their health seems not too fine at the moment ,old age s make them slowerly, and forgetful something by brain. I have thought hard about them , how to care for them always even though there is no social-welfare are not any socials care for old people here. I coudcannot leave my work to be with them daily .so sad. I love them so much I pray for them to stay well and enjoy their last life . I came back went back to the city at 5pm,cooked dinner, chatted alittle with my friends,watched my favouristte film and sleep then slept. Well a new week a ahead .I hope a happy week and work well for myself. .Wish all friends here have a funny one too.
either 'my' or 'this', not both!
chatted, slept, watched - all past tense, don't mix past and present together.
Good Sweetie!
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