Work in Guangzhou
I have came to Guangzhou since I graduated from university.Guangzhou is a fast-tampo city.What impress me most is crowded.In downtown,every people always walk in a hurry.And you can see people,cars and buses everywhere.Every time go out,I feel so tired.
However,I adapt quickly to the new environment.Guangzhou is also a city which have grate opportunities and challenges.And I am fond of this lively city gradually.
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Work in Guangzhou
I have came to Guangzhou since I graduated from university.Guangzhou is a fast-tampo city.What impress me most is crowded.In downtown,every people always walk in a hurry.And you can see people,cars and buses everywhere.Every time go out,I feel so tired.
However,I adapt quickly to the new environment.Guangzhou is also a city which have grate opportunities and challenges.And I am fond of this lively city gradually.
Work in Guangzhou
I came to Guangzhou since graduating from University. Guangzhou is a fast-tempo city. What impresses me most are the crowds. Downtown, People are always walking in a hurry and you can see people, cars and buses everywhere. Everytime I go out I feel so tired. However, I have quickly adapted to the new environment.
Guangzhou is also a city which has great opportunities and challenges. I am gradually becoming fond of this lively city.
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I think that you should write this: I have been Guangzhou since I graduated from university. personal concept.
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The first sentence is almostly correct except a word "came", you know, the Past Participle of "come" should be "come " itself. I believe this is your unnoticeably minor error.
As to the second, in my view, it makes sense. Both have the same expression, however, they have different degrees.
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My suggestion as correction: "I came to Guangzhou after having graduated from university."
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How to correct this sentence"I have came to Guangzhou since I graduated from university."
Can I say"I came to Guangzhou as soon as I graduated from university."?
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