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Come here and correct my essay please,i am ready to accept this. Question: Full-time university students need to spend a lot of time studying, but it is essential to involve other activities. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Nowadays,a great number of people studying in college and they spent majority of them time to studying on courses,specially students in famou college,which require a higher offer standard is hard to enroll in.Some people cautously suggested that a good student not only should learn well,but also have various activities lifes. There is a sound of disagree,whether students in a general college or a famous should only focus on their acadamic studying,because college is a great platform contains a varieties of knowledge,besides four years studying time is very limit compare with a people whole life span,thus students should better utilize these time to learning well and contribute for society in the future. However,if a college student did not have any other activities, then he or she probably have only one ability is studying.There are a range of knowledge and information should learned by students,besides,a great number of them provided in enormous fields not just from books.For example,first of all,experience is very important for students and it never can be learned from a book.Students should could gain many experience throught participant various activities such as playing game,dating with others,social events and so forth.Another things cannot learned from books is emotional intelligence which really crucial for students as well.When students suffer from cruel society and vacational enviorment,may be could gain a few,which mean emotional intelligence cost so much time to accumulated. In conclusion,students who have a great quality,are not a studying machine,however should be a combination of ability to learning well and favor to have various activities.

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Full-time university students need to spend a lot of time studying, but it is essential for them to be involved in other activities. 

To what extent do you agree or disagree?



Nowadays,a great number of people studying in college and they spent the majority of them their time to studying on courses. Especially students in famous colleges, which require a higher offer standard is hard to enroll in. Some people cautiously suggested that a good student not only should learn well, but also have do various activities lifes.

 

word, word <-- with a space.

Sorry, I have run out of time & I sort of lost your thought there.

 

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已经没人敢进来了,下次还是发小作文算了
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你的作文如此之长 不怕把别人吓走吗

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