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Today is women's day In Russia and some other countries today is women's day! I adore this holiday, men attend to women. They are very polite today. In the morning I woke up and saw the flowers on the table. My mood became good at once.My father and brother congratulated me and mother. After that we went to relatives. My grandmother cooked many tasty things. We ate and spoke. We laughed. It was nice! After that I met my boyfriend and we saw cinema and ate pizza. On this day I got several presents. It was good day!.. Day of nice mood,gulosity,presents.

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Today is Women's Day

 

In Russia and some other countries, today is Women's Day! I adore this holiday; men attend to women. They are very polite today. In the morning I woke up and saw the flowers on the table. My mood became good at once. My father and brother congratulated me and mother. After that we went to relatives. My grandmother cooked many tasty things. We ate and spoke. We laughed. It was nice! After that, I met my boyfriend and we went to the cinema and ate pizza. On this day I got several presents. It was good day!.. Day of nice mood, gulosity, presents.

 

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Excellent! The only real problem was with the cinema. Cinema is usually the place, so you can either "go to the cinema" or "go to the theater" OR "see a movie" or "watch a film." "Saw cinema doesn't really work. Happy 8th of March!!!))


Oh, also I've never heard the word "gulosity" before, it is not common at all, but I researched it and you used it correctly, I think)))

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Hi there, I am looking for a language exchange partner who can help me in Russian and in return I can help in improving English.
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It's said that yesterday is girls' day
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Wishing a very Happy Women’s Day to all the women around the world.On this special day, celebrate life. Take a break from your busy schedule. Let your hair down, have fun and do what your heart says. Today is your day. Have a great Women’s Day!

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