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Morality and Education
it is recognized by everybody that the strength of a country depends upon its education system. The higher the education standard, the stronger the country becomes. Although that is indeed true,
but my opinion is that, in order to make a country truly strong, education alone is not sufficient. It should go side by side with morality.
Morality and education are the foundations of a country. Education without morality is dangerous. Morality without education is also harmful.
Xiao Wei, you have made such a wonderful point in your essay! We here much talk about levels of education in different countries but your idea of morality is not usually part of the discussion. Personally, I feel a country can only be truly strong if the system is based on justice and fairness. Congratulations!
Please be careful with the spacing after punctuation marks and the capitalization of the 1st letter of the 1st word in a sentence.
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