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March 7th Thursday Sunny
Our class will host a commodity fair at the end of this month, at which we will sell varied goods in the open air. After ending our morning's classes. We went to wholesale market searching for some goods suitable for being sold in school. And the profits will be applied to buying gifts for autistic children when we come to see them, which is meaningful.
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Today's diary
March 7th Thursday Sunny
Our class will host a commodity fair (?) at the end of this ("this month" is correct, but better "end of the month") month, at which we will sell varied goods in the open air (correct, perhaps "outdoors" more idomatic?). After ending our morning's classes, (Better "our morning classes). W we went to a/the wholesale market to search searching for some goods suitable for being sold in school. (Better - "to search for suitable goods.") And The profits will be applied to (Better "used for") buying gifts for autistic children (which we will then give to them.)? when we come to see them, which is meaningful.
Very nice!
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