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If I were a bus driver With growing traffic jams in this city,I chose to took bus to work yesterday.I like to watch people with eager expression when they are waiting for the bus at bus stops.I could see eagerness on their face that they never notice of. If I were a bus driver,I would like to observe people waiting anxiously,especially when I came near,crowds of people gathered together to round my bus without patience.they desired for my bus just as they desire for me.After they took place in the bus,I found pleasure on their face.Of course,it wouldn’t happen in Hongkong,and people always wait in line for bus.but for me,I like to see people fight for their seat and to watch people with burning passion in it.

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If I were a bus driver

With the growing number of traffic jams in this city, I chose to take a bus to work yesterday.

(If you want to say something is becoming worse because of the amount, you can say 'the growing number of _____' ; also, verb phrases that start with the word 'to' usually have a base form or simple present form of the verb after it. Examples: To take, to leave, to go, to come, etc.)

 

I like to watch people with their eager expressions when they are waiting for the bus at bus stops. I could see eagerness on their face that they are not aware of.

If I were a bus driver, I would like to observe people waiting anxiously, especially when I come near, and crowds of people gathered together around my bus without patience.

 

They are eager for my bus just as they are eager for me.

 

After they take their seats in the bus, I find pleasure on their face.

 

Of course, it wouldn’t happen in Hongkong, and people always wait in line for the bus. But for me, I would like to watch people aggresively fight for their seats. and to watch people with burning passion in it.

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