IELTS task 1. "Employment Rates In 6 Different areas Countires".Could you please help me and correct my notes?

The bar chart compares changes which took place in (I think the chart is just showing, not comparing) shows the employment rates in six various countries around the world according to gender in the time period from 1995 to 2005 (the figures are only for the 2 years specified, not the whole period) for the years 1995 and 2005. As can clearly be seen from the given statistics, in 1995, while only 55% of males in the UK had jobs in 1995, while Icelander males had the highest employment rates of 70% (70%). In contrast, approximately 25% of females from in both New Zealand and Australia worked were working in 1995, compared to over 50% of females employed in the UK and Switzerland.
With respect to male workers in 2005, slightly over than (either "more than" or "over") 70% of males in the USA, New Zealand, and the UK found employment opportunities, whereas this figure rose to roughly 80% for Icelander males. Moreover, women workers in Switzerland could find jobs more easily than those in the other countries mentioned. However, merely 40% of Australian women worked were working in the given year. 2005.
To conclude, it is clear that in all aforementioned countries the percentage of male employees were was by far more higher than (either "more than" or "higher than" women workers'.