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Viral Videos A viral video are a music movie made with humor and through internet by a lot of people view. They are distributed through e-mail, whatsap, social networks and in the end they finish on YouTube. The last viral video was Harlem Shake. It began to be know the last January. This film have a funny dance playing by nonprofessional dancers. Yesterday I watched on TV news that one airline is being investigated because into flying was made a Harlem Shake. Thanks :)

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Viral Videos

A viral video are is a music movie video made with humor and shared through via the internet by a lot of people view.


They are distributed through e-mail whatsap, and social networks and in the end they finish on YouTube.
The last latest viral video was called Harlem Shake. It began to be know became popular the last January. This film have features a funny dance playing by nonprofessional dancers.
Yesterday I watched on TV news that one airline is being investigated because into flying was made a Harlem Shake. a group of athletes on board one of its planes decided to reenact the Harlem Shake in midair.

 

I haven't seen this video, I'll have to watch it. :)

Nice job! Some tips: 

1) "to become" (verb) quiere decir "convertirse en."

2) "first," and "last," denote a closed, finite sequence. It's likely that there will continue to appear new viral videos; the Harlem Shake wasn't actually the final one. "Latest," means "most recent," which is more appropriate to this topic.

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Viral Videos

A viral video are is a music movie made with humor and viewed by a lot of people through the internet. by a lot of people view.
They are distributed through e-mail, whatsapp, social networks and inat the end they finish and up on YouTube.
The last viral video was Harlem Shake. It began to be well known the last January. This film has have a funny dance playing performed by nonprofessional dancers.
Yesterday I watched saw on the TV news that one airline is being investigated because ( into flying was made a Harlem Shake.) I dont understand what you trying to say here
Thanks :)

 

Well Done!

Keep it up :)

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I can't believe there are no mistakes ;))

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