好天气
Today is a sunny day.Good whether make my hert warm.I think it is a good beginning.Later i will come to supermarket.I need to buy some milk,fruit and others.Otherwise i will not have time to do this on my workdays.Ok,i need to prepare my lunch at 11:00.What food i want to eat today?Let me think,tofu,green vegetables with sausage and rice.En,action.
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好天气
Today is a sunny day. Good weather makes my heart warm. I think it is a good beginning. Later I will go to the supermarket. I need to buy some milk, fruits and other items. Otherwise, I will not have time to do this on my workdays. Okay, I need to prepare my lunch at 11:00. What food do I want to eat today? Let me think; tofu, green vegetables with sausage and rice.
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好天气
Today is a sunny day.Good whether make my hert warm.I think it is a good beginning.Later i will come to supermarket.I need to buy some milk,fruit, and others.Otherwise i will not have time to do this on my workdays.Ok,i need to prepare my lunch at 11:00.What food i want to eat today?Let me think,tofu,green vegetables with sausage, and rice.En,action.
Allison corrected your essay very well. When you are listing items (serial listing), it is necessary to place a comma before "and".
I enjoyed your 1st essay very much. I'm looking forward to reading your next story!
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