Multicultural societies

Assimilating various cultures is virtually a common sight in many countries. However, discussion centers on whether multicultural society is harmful to a country. My view is that allowing people of different ethnic backgrounds living together brings more pros than cons.

Cross-culture communication helps to inspire people with great innovation, and therefore contributes to the development of a nation. This is because in a multi-culture environment, people learn to view, interpret, and appreciate this world from an exotic perspective that their foreign neighbors get used to. In most cases, the collision of various ideas leads to inventions and creation. Think of New York, a palace of arts and a city of multiculturalism.

Moreover, cultural inclusiveness enhances a country’s international image. It is obvious that a high standard of tolerance and respect towards other civilizations, beliefs, and customs reflects a high standard of national quality, which attracts immigrants all over the world. America is a typical example. Due to its open and inclusive policy, America is not only is a dream land for those suffer from war and deprivation, but also gains appreciation and a good reputation for itself.

Of course, multicultural society also has some adverse effects to a country. After all, the misunderstanding and distortion of perception, caused by a culture conflict, cannot be addressed easily. But it is just a short term problem. As time passes, people gain confidence to get along well with ethnic groups.

In summary, I reaffirm my position that having a diverse range of people from various backgrounds in a country is far more beneficial. Meanwhile, the government should pay more attention to speed up the intercommunication among people. Only be doing so, can we embrace a more vibrant and wonderful nation.

What a wonderful essay, Erica! You make so many points that reflect your deep sensitivity.  The essay was extremely well written!  Congratulations!

Multicultural societies

Assimilating The assimilation of various cultures is virtually a common sight in many countries. However, discussion centers on whether a multicultural society is harmful to a country. My view is that allowing people of different ethnic backgrounds living to live together brings has more pros than cons.

Cross-culture communication helps to inspire people with great innovation, and therefore contributes to the development of a nation. This is because in a multi-cultural environment, people learn to view, interpret and appreciate this world from an exotic perspective that their foreign neighbors get are used to. In most cases, the collision of various ideas leads to inventions and creation. Think of New York, a palace of the arts and a multicultural city of multiculturalism. 

Moreover, cultural inclusiveness enhances a country’s international image. It is obvious that a high standard of tolerance and respect towards other civilizations, beliefs and customs reflects a high standard of national quality, which attracts immigrants from all over the world. America is a typical example. Due to its open and inclusive policy, America not only is a dream land for those suffering from war and deprivation, but also gains appreciation and a good reputation for itself.

Of course, being a multicultural society also has some adverse effects to on a country. After all, the misunderstanding and distortion of perception, caused by a cultural conflict, cannot be addressed easily. But it is just a short term problem. As time passes, people have the confidence to get along well with other ethnic groups. 

In summary, I reaffirm my position that having a diverse range of people from various backgrounds in a country is far more beneficial (Or if you do want to say 'far more', add a 'than' like, 'is far more beneficial than not having that diversity'). Meanwhile, the government should pay more attention in speeding up the intercommunion among people. Only by doing so, can we embrace a more vibrant and wonderful nation.