could you please correct my writing?
There were around 20 people came to the election of MAFEC chairman for 2013-2014 period, yesterday (Sunday 24th February 2013), at Trisna's house on Pakis. There were 5 candidates were proposed, they are First, Yudha, Adin, Farida, and Ryan.
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Could you please correct my writing?
There were around 20 people that came to the election of MAFEC chairman for 2013-2014 period. Yesterday (Sunday 24th February 2013) (no comma) at Trisna's house on Pakis, there were 5 candidates were who proposed: they are First, Yudha, Adin, Farida, and Ryan.
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