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Some words about me
I am learning English, coz I'm interested in different cultures, mentality, it helps making friends, travelling, watching eng./american movies...etc.
The next 2 languages i would like to know are italian and spanish. (probably it'll be greek:)
Native languages: russian, ukrainian.
I enjoy rollerblading, skating, esoteric literature, hard music...
Some words about me
I am learning English, cozbecause I'm interested in different cultures, and mentalities, it Learning English helps when making friends, travelling, watching eng./american movies...etc.
The next 2 languages i would like to know are italian and spanish. (Most likely probably it'll be greek:)
Native languages: russian, ukrainian.
I enjoy rollerblading, skating, reading esoteric literature, and listening to hard music...
TIP:
Cultures is plural, therefore mentality should also be plural (mentalities)
Not sure what you mean by hard music? do you mean rock and roll?
Some words about me
I am learning English, coz because I'm interested in different cultures, mentality, it helps making friends, travelling, watching eng./american movies...etc.
The next 2 languages i would like to know learn are Italian and Spanish. (probably it'll be greek:)
Native languages: Russian, Ukrainian.
I enjoy rollerblading, skating, esoteric literature, hard music...
Some Words about Myself
Since you are the writer, using the reflexive myself makes most sense. However, me is not entirely wrong: "(Here are) some words about me."
I am learning English, because I'm interested in different cultures, and their mentalities. It also helps when making friends, travelling, watching English-language./american movies...etc and so on.
The word coz is slangy, and it looks terrible in writing. Be wary of this.
The next two languages I would like to learn are Italian and Spanish (then probably it'll be Greek). :)
Remember when to use capital letters! Also, it's a good habit to write numbers as words.
My native languages: are Russian, and Ukrainian.
Try to write a proper sentence instead of relying on punctuation and point form. This will also improve your spoken English.
I enjoy rollerblading, skating, esoteric literature and heavy music...
Good work! I'm not sure what you meant by "hard" music.
Some words about me
I am learning English because I'm interested in different cultures and mentalities. It helps with making friends, travelling, watching British/American movies, etc.
The next 2 languages I would like to know are Italian and Spanish. (Probably it'll be greek:)
Native languages: Russian, Ukrainian.
I enjoy rollerblading, skating, esoteric literature, and hard music...
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Great job! In English, we use capital letters for proper nouns such as names of countries :)
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