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Today's Events. Today, I went in for my bookkeeping exam. I don't know whether I has passed that exam. But I think I did my best. By the way Strong wind blew today. It is maybe "Haru Ichiban". In English says, "first spring storm". So, I decided to stay at home this weekend. I love knitting. Now, I am knitting mitten. I hope my knitting work is going better.

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Today's Events.



Today, I went to for my bookkeeping exam. (~を行きました)英語では動詞(を)TO

I went to cinema(シネマを行きました),I wan't to eat(リンゴを食べたいです)
I don't know whether I has passed that exam.
But I think I did my best.

By the way Strong wind blew today.
It is maybe "Haru Ichiban".
In English says, "first spring storm".

So, I decided to stay at home this weekend.
I love knitting.
Now, I am knitting mitten.
I hope my knitting work is going better. あなたの英語は本当に良いですね!がんばってね。。。

 

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Today's Events.



Today, I went in for my bookkeeping exam. (I think I hear people say went to more often)


I don't know whether I has passed that exam but I think I did my best.

By the way, strong winds blew today.


It is maybe because of "Haru Ichiban".


In English they call it says, "first spring storm".

So, I decided to stay at home this weekend to knit (I think it would be more natural and fluent to add this one ^^!)

I love knitting.

Now, I am knitting mitten. 
I hope my knitting work is going better.

 

 

I'm sure you're going to pass the exam easily since you're a hard-working person in my opinion. I learn a lot from you, Shinoda-san! Good luck with your knitting work too!

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Today's Events.



Today, I went in for my bookkeeping exam.
I don't know whether I has passed that exam,
but¹ I think I did my best.

By the way a Strong wind blew today.
It is maybe "Haru Ichiban".
In English is "first spring storm".

So, I decided to stay at home this weekend.
I love knitting.
Now, I am knitting mitten.
I hope my knitting work is going better.

 

You're very good at english, Keep on.

¹But makes a connection between the last sentence and the new sentence, when you write it use the ",".

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thank you Andre! ありがとう アンドレさん!
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I wish you good luck at your exam, I hope you can pass. :D

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