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the dead today in the morning... 7:40 the phone did "ring ring...ring" my father taked the call... hi? can I to talk with my cusin alberto? I´m ok,I called you because my mom are die what you say? yes, my mom are die oh!sorry man no problem,if you want to come to the funeral is at my house ok, I´ll go 8 hours later... my family are in the funeral... the dead isn´t the end only is a step. I want to learn english,I need to learn english.

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The Dead

Today at 7:40 in the morning the phone rang.
7:40 the phone did "ring ring...ring"
My father taked took the call...
"Hi?"
"Can I to talk with to my cusin cousin Alberto?"
"I´m Alberto."
"Ok, I called you because my mom are die died."
"What did you say?"
"Yes, my mom are die died."
"Oh! sorry man."
"No problem, if you want to come to the funeral it is at my house."
"Ok, I´ll go."
8 hours later...
My family are is in the funeral...
the dead  Death isn´t the end, It is only is a step.



I want to learn english, I need to learn english.

* I added quotation marks to set off the material that represents quoted or spoken language. ^^
* I capitalized the first word of the quoted sentence and the proper nouns.
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cesar_ae,you did a good job. Animate,hombre!
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the dead

today in the morning...
7:40 the phone rang "ring ring...ring"
my father took the call...
hi?
can I to talk with my cusin alberto?
I´m
ok,I called you because my mom is dead
what are you saying?
yes, my mom is dead 
oh!sorry man
no problem,if you want  to come to the funeral, that is at my house
ok, I´ll go
8 hours later...
my family are in the funeral...
the death isn´t the end and it is only  a step.



I want to learn english,I need to learn english.
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the dead

today in the morning...
7:40 the phone did "ring ring...ring"
my father taked took the call...
hi?
can I to talk with my cusin cousin alberto?
I´m Alberto .
ok,I called you because my mom has died
what did you say?
yes, my mom are die has died.
oh!sorry man
no problem,if you want to come to the funeral, it is at my house
ok, I´ll go
8 hours later...
my family are is in the funeral...
the dead Death isn´t the end, it is only is a step.



I want to learn english,I need to learn english.

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