First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I am a chinese girl,and I am learning English because of need of work.In my spare time,I ofen listen to music and think but always think nothing.I want to find a lanuage partner,if you can speak English and want to learn chinese,please keep in touch with me.

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I am a Chinese girl, and I am learning English because I need to for work. In my spare time, I enjoy listening to music and thinking, but nothing comes up. I want to find a language partner, so if you speak English and want to learn Chinese, please get in contact with me.

Comment: Not sure what you meant by the thinking part. If you want a better translation of that, get in contact with me. Otherwise, good job! 

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I am a chinese girl,and I am learning English . In my spare time,I often listen music and try hard to think in English. I want to find a language partner, if you can speak English and want to learn chinese,please keep in touch with me.

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I am a Chinese girl, and I am learning English because of the needs of work. In my spare time, I often listen to music and think, but always think of nothing. I want to find a language partner, so if you can speak English and want to learn Chinese, please keep in touch with me.

[Nice work.]