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My School Way Hey guys. I don't know that what I will write. I am going to write that what will come to my mind at the time. Everyday, I spend my 4 hours at road because my school is far away. I get on a bus, steamer and tram. The tram is the worst because it is often crowded. Some people step your foot or some people push you. My hair is long. So people usually pull my hair unconsciously. So when I get on the tram, I get angry. But when I get on the steamer, I feel very peaceful because there is the sea. And I like watching to the sea. After all that, when I arrive to home, I feel really tired every time.

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My School Way

Hey guys. I don't know that what I will write. I am going to write whatever will come to my mind at the time. Everyday, I spend my 4 hours on the road because my school is far away. I get on a bus, steamer and tram. The tram is the worst because it is often crowded. Some people step on your foot or some people push you. My hair is long, so people usually pull my hair unconsciously. So when I get on the tram, I get angry. But when I get on the steamer, I feel very peaceful because there is the sea. I also like watching to the sea. After all that, when I arrive to home, I feel really tired every time.

 

[Very good.  One of my biggest hates was being on a crowded tram or bus for a long time.]

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